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The River That Flows

Thursday, July 02, 2009

Life is like a river constantly flowing.
Rounding turns and bends going on
and on again and again.

A river has ripples like smiles
and winks.
Glitters when the sun shines
on it.

The river has rocks giving it
bumps to climb.
Just like life it runs on and

A tree branch laying on
the top of it, gives it an
obsticle to stop its flow.
The river is constant and
does get through, what
an accomplishment to

The river that flows is
much like life.
It has its stress and

by:paula Strasburg

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    Thanks for sharing. Its a nice poem. How are you doing sweetie? emoticon emoticon emoticon emoticon
    4257 days ago
  • SHERRY666
    What a wonderful poem............... Thanks for sharing Paula...... emoticon
    4258 days ago
    Thank you for the beautiful poem. It is awsome. You have put in words what life is. I appreciate your generous gift. Your sharing is inspiring.
    4259 days ago
    the river of life has many turns. and i am picturing your river turning a bend into the glow of a beautiful sun shining light.i see you sitting on a rock on the edge with your feet in head up to catch that sunshine and receive its warmth. you have done great things for me with those great poems or yours and your awesome attitude.you are special. have a great and happy 4th emoticon emoticon emoticon
    4259 days ago
    emoticon to see your poems emoticon emoticon emoticon
    Hope you are doing better at this time
    4259 days ago
  • JAVAJO47
    What an awesome poem Paula! You are so right in likening our lives to a river. Our lives flow like a river with bumps and turns along the way but with sunshine to brighten it as well.

    Thanks for sharing your inspiration.
    4259 days ago
    What a beautiful poem. I love your wallpaper. I think it's very pretty. I also love Thomas Kincaid as well. I was in an art gallery and almost bought one of his paintings. I keep kicking myself for not doing it.
    4259 days ago
    Thank you so much for posting this poem - it's lovely.
    What you've written is so true.. just like the river, our lives are changing constantly, making sudden turn, or tackling a rock or a bump on the way.
    And just like the river we adjust to these changes , sometimes easily and sometimes w/ years of struggles.

    Have a great day.
    4259 days ago

    Comment edited on: 7/3/2009 12:39:59 AM
  • MYTURN11
    Thank you for posting this it was lovely and I have five of Thomas Kincaid’s framed prints. He is awesome as the painter of light. I wish my printer was not out of ink or I want have printed this. It always amazes me that water is so gentle and consistent in flowing but that it carves into rock. No where have I seen more evidence of this then at the Grand Canyon. Did not mean to go on for so long. Have a wonderful fit and healthy weekend.

    Update: OMG, you wrote this. I just looked at your page Paula, Very inspirational!

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    4259 days ago

    Comment edited on: 7/3/2009 12:29:00 AM
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